Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

[Devotional Sex]

Devotional Sex for Loving Couples - A Novel, by Scott Chapman

This is an instructional erotic novel on using Devotional Sex to reignite and then maintain intimacy and passion in your relationship. So it's both erotic and fun to read, but will also help you take Devotional Sex into your real-life.

This forum topic is for comments, discussion, or questions about this new novel. All feedback is very much appreciated!

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[54321]

Good on you, Scott!

I'm enjoying the story and looking forward to the next chapter.

54321

PS. Sarah mentioned play with others. Ooh!.. I'm interested to see how that develops!

[Kev1959]

I've been reading it as well and am really enjoying it. It's both informative and exciting. Good job ..... looking forward to each chapter!

[Devotional Sex]

Thanks for the feedback 54321 and Kev1959.

Scott is reading the comments but doesn't wish to post, but I'll pass on anything he wishes to say here.

I've just published chapters 21 and 22, and if you have enjoyed it so far I'm sure you will love these two chapters

And please feel free to say what you liked about what happens in any chapter. What's hot (and what's not)?

One of the advantages of publishing online is that minor changes can easily be made. So feel free to suggest any.
Of course only changes Scott thinks are an improvement will be made.

The plan is to put the novel up onto Literotica once it is complete, or close to it. Many more people will see it there, and hopefully some of them will be inspired to find this website, read more, and then explore DevS in their real-life!

[54321]

Dear Scott,

I am enjoying your novel so much.

The characters are credible and likeable (it's always important to me that I care whether they live or die)
the story moves forward well and there is plenty of room for them to develop as they experience
the fear and excitement of new things... and it's hot! What more do we need?

Most people read but don't comment on any forum of course, but I'm surprised
that there is not a long list of plaudits.

I'm already eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

54321

[Devotional Sex]

A post from Scott...

Thanks for the positive feedback. Plenty more chapters will follow.

Sarah mentioned play with others. Ooh!.. I'm interested to see how that develops!

Knights are always hopeful that more may develop, but readers will have to channel their inner knight and see if Sarah has activities with others or is wanting Will to simply hope they might happen.

Scott

[Kev1959]

I'm thoroughly enjoying your story Scott!

I like seeing things through Adam's eyes. Since I was the one who initiated the idea of DevS to my wife it's interesting to see how a guy would react to the whole thing if it was brought to him. The idea of not cumming every time is so foreign to our whole DNA that it will be cool to see how he comes around to that way of thinking ….willingly not ejaculating and loving it!

I'm looking forward to (I hope?) when the two couples start to compare notes (among other things) ...if that's in your plans ...

Again, great job...very fun and hot read ...keep up the good work!

[Devotional Sex]

I've been the editor as the very secretive Scott (the Bansky of the DevS world) worked on his novel.

The idea is to have the two couples be very different - Sarah and Will older, it having been Will's idea to start DevS, and Sarah fairly conservative, whilst Kali and Adam are younger, it is her idea to start DevS, she is adventurous - after the walk in the park I'm sure that this is by now obvious and Adam is at the line where though he initially strongly rejects DevS, not to give things away, he might be able to be converted by Kali

[54321]

Just read 25 - 27. Bravo!

54321

[54321]

54321 wrote:
Sarah mentioned play with others. Ooh!.. I'm interested to see how that develops!

Knights are always hopeful that more may develop, but readers will have to channel their inner knight and see if Sarah has activities with others or is wanting Will to simply hope they might happen.

Scott

Scott darling, you are SUCH a tease!

54321