Affirmed - a short novel by Scott Chapman - comments

[Devotional Sex]

It's the topic - Re: Affirmed by Scott Chapman

[54321]

OK Found it. I like it. Please continue. It's a little more fun than the other novel which is somewhere between a story and a 'how to' manual .
I hope this one just unfolds as a romantic, erotic adventure.

54321

[Scott]

Thanks for the feedback 54321.

You're right that the main novel is a mix of an erotic novel and a how to manual. The aim is to excite people about the possibility of trying or living Devotional Sex and to do that they need to hear some of the information about how it works.

Did you find the first short story The Vacation too much of a how to story or is the balance more erotic?

[Meadow]

Hello Scott,
I particularly liked this chapter.

Though one could argue we are always in the midst of foreplay, except when engaged in sexual activity.

I felt chapter 4 captured how when a Princess and Knight are together there can be a lot of sexual excitement, connection and tension all the time.

More please....

[Devotional Sex]

Unfortunately I felt that Chapter 4 was rather unrealistic for me now that I'm much older than Aaron

How I wish I were as young as Aaron is in the story as then I could have risen to the occasion for as long as he did!
And how wonderful it would have been to know about Devotional Sex in my 20's !!!!

Some may think that Becky missed out on receiving activity that evening. But this only happened because that is what she chose, and a Princess making such a decision is very realistic.

But Aaron would have been wanting to give her pleasure all the time he was aroused, and he will now be very eager to give her pleasure next session. Becky will enjoy the rewards of this hunger the next day or when she wishes. So neither she nor he miss out overall in her being pleasured.

Thanks for posting such a fun chapter, and I too look forward to more.

[Meadow]

Nice!

So from now on the only way I'm going to think of bed size if in terms of how many Princesses receiving Pleasure from their Knight can fit.

What an image!

[Meadow]

Chapter 6. I'm jealous of both ladies. And I know my Knight would like this to play out for us. Something to aspire to, perhaps once masks aren't required. A post pandemic plan.

I'm the meanwhile, wonderful entertainment. Thank you.

[Devotional Sex]

Re Chapter 7 - Creating some lasting memories by Aaron ....

How could you???!!!!

That's only the start of this episode! I, and I'm sure all others who read this chapter, have been left hanging.

So WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

[Scott]

A princess doesn't reveal her plans

[Devotional Sex]

Re Chapter 8 ....

Great story. Princess Meadow read it first, and told me there was drama. I replied to her "So is this the first DevS story where people fire guns". Well it seems a gun did fire

My surveys have shown that many DevS couples have had the adventure of him being Affirmed in front of others, and many other couples who have not yet done this in real-life say that they both would enjoy it.

As we are all different I'm sure that there are many ways which this can happen or that people fantasize about it happening. So it is fun to read each take.

I thought that in Chapter 8 that the when the Knight first realized he was close to losing control that he should have said something so that the action would ease up or pause for a while. In your story I think he leaves this a bit too late - and thus it was too late. But in such a situation I can imagine his losing control being fairly sudden and unstoppable. So even if he had asked for her to ease up or stop a little earlier, the result could, in real-life, be the same. Just not quite as quick.

It was great that your story had the Princess accepting that 'accidents happen'.

I look forward to the next chapter.