Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

[Meadow]

Hi Scott,
Have just caught up on chapters 1-6 rewrite.
It seems to flow more easily, and work very well.
And it sets up how good DevS is and can be.
Xx Meadow

[Mark KL]

This is really wonderful Scott. Enjoying it very much.

[Mark KL]

A nice couple of chapters this month Scott. Enjoying it very much.

[nishnish9901]

You’re not done with this story are you? I hope not!

[Scott]

Hi everyone,

I have completed an edit of this story and all the posts have been updated. So if you haven't read it in a while you might want return to the very beginning, my hope is that it is a better read following this edit.

All comments are welcome.

Scott.

[Devotional Sex]

Congratulations Scott in getting your massive edit of the novel completed and posted.

I look forward to giving the new version a read.

For anyone who does so before I get to it, please feel free to be the first to offer Scott some feedback.