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Re: Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

Postby Meadow » Sat Mar 25, 2023 8:45 pm

Hi Scott,
Have just caught up on chapters 1-6 rewrite.
It seems to flow more easily, and work very well.
And it sets up how good DevS is and can be.
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Re: Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

Postby Mark KL » Sun Jun 04, 2023 10:35 am

This is really wonderful Scott. Enjoying it very much.
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Re: Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

Postby Mark KL » Sat Jul 22, 2023 5:34 am

A nice couple of chapters this month Scott. Enjoying it very much.
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Re: Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

Postby nishnish9901 » Thu Oct 26, 2023 3:29 am

You’re not done with this story are you? I hope not!
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Re: Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

Postby Scott » Fri Nov 24, 2023 10:41 pm

Hi everyone,

I have completed an edit of this story and all the posts have been updated. So if you haven't read it in a while you might want return to the very beginning, my hope is that it is a better read following this edit.

All comments are welcome.

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Re: Comments about 'DevS for Loving Couples - A Novel'

Postby Devotional Sex » Fri Nov 24, 2023 10:45 pm

Congratulations Scott in getting your massive edit of the novel completed and posted.

I look forward to giving the new version a read.

For anyone who does so before I get to it, please feel free to be the first to offer Scott some feedback.
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