Affirmed - a short novel by Scott Chapman - comments

[Scott]

I've posted the opening to a new short novel I'm writing. If you would like to comment on the novel please do so in this topic rather than between the chapters so as not to disturb the flow of reading the novel.

Hopefully people will enjoy this different story. Comments welcome.

Scott

[Scott]

I want to point out that this novel is very raw and will be posted almost as soon as the first draft is written for each chapter, so please bear with editing and alterations, but I thought for those who are struggling with Covid 19 issues it would be nice to have an escape.

Scott

[Devotional Sex]

Great fun to read chapter 1.

I love that you have created a very realistic scenario where everyone is fully consensual. That something like this could very easily happen with any couple who practice Devotional Sex makes the story, for me, far more erotic and exciting than a story which is a wishful thinking and very unlikely fantasy.

I very much look forward to Ch 2.

PS - Scott says that this is a first draft, so I'll keep this story for now just in the forum. But once it gets polished I'll add it to the stories in the main website. This comments thread will remain.

[Meadow]

Nice one Scott.

I know at least one Knight that would enjoy this adventure. As a Princess I can imagine this being fun. A treat for the Knight. A show for the friend. Strong connection between Princess a Knight. Admiration for the Knight.

Looking forward to hearing what may happen next?

[Meadow]

Interesting Scott.

Chapter two is entirely not what I expected.

Nice thinking about the play and fun involved in Princess surprises for the Knight.

Looking forward to more.

[Scott]

Sorry that chapter 3 hasn't appeared yet, I have been busy, had some technical issues and not sure how the second half of the chapter is going to progress. It will arrive...

Scott

[Meadow]

Thanks Scott. Was wondering.

[Devotional Sex]

Thanks for Chapter 3 - I enjoyed it

And so taboo - having a friend over and giving them a hug!!!!!!

In Australia we are allowed to have friends visit, but physical distancing is meant to be maintained. It still feels strange to not give very good friends a hug goodbye.

I look forward to Ch 4.

[Meadow]

I like chapter 3.

Not sure if I'd do willingly share my affirmed Knight for a foot massage without me having one too.

I'm enjoying chatting about this with Michael and imagining what could / might occur should opportunity arise.

You don't mind if I stare at you?"

"No, I find it arousing when Becky does. I'm still getting used to you doing so at the moment, but I'm sure any uncertainty will vanish in time and I'll only find it arousing to have you looking at me when I'm affirmed."

I love the dynamics of this situation. How the Knight is feeling. How the Princess is feeling. How the guest is feeling. The smiles and peeks.

Looking forward to more.

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Affirmed - a short novel by Scott Chapman - comments
Postby Scott » Mon May 25, 2020 9:37 pm

I've posted the opening to a new short novel I'm writing.

Erm... where is it?

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